This photo is for love and respect for the internet.
Its available at flickCC.com
http://flickrcc.bluemountains.net/flickrCC/index.php
date of picture: 04/03/07
Monday
we learned how to do parts of speech, parts of sentence, and tell what
phrases and clauses in a sentence. We also learned how to cite a picture
on our blog! So lots of pictures are coming soon!
On
Tuesday we learned a lot of things and i'm going to tell you all about
them. Ethics are the principles and morals that govern people behavior,
for example honesty and respect towards others. Online ethics is as it
relates to Internet and digital devices. Digital Citizenship is a safe,
responsible, and ethical approach to functioning in a digital world.
Privacy is obviously respect privacy of others online. Self-Expression
and Identity is present yourself honestly and genuinely in an online
world. Connected Culture is treating others kindly and respectfully,
avoid cyber bullying.Last but not least Respecting Creative Work is cite others work (give
credit) and ask permission. All of these words will help you not in
trouble and to use the internet and other things the right way and not
the wrong way.
Wednesday
we made a video on Animoto.com it is really cool. You can make all
kinds of videos and its a great thing to use for a presentation or for a
birthday present. I have made a great video and it didn’t take me no
time to make this for the stuff that we learned on Tuesday. How I made
my Animoto is that our teacher told us to go to the website and make an
account, then after you could pick a layout for your video and start
putting pictures, the background music, and the texts. I think my
Animoto is great and the best one I made yet. It will show you the
basics of learning how to be respectful and kind to others and others on
the internet. The most I like about it is that its free to use and has awesome tools. the least is that some layouts you can't use them unless you buy them.
This week has been great I'm finally getting the hang of Gaston Early College High School.

This is great blog post! I like your Animoto presentation and your picture that you included in this post. Although this is a good blog post, I do have a few suggestions to make. If I were you I would break the big, chunky paragraphs into smaller, more readable sections. Also, I would change how you introduced each topic that we learned about this week. Instead of saying,"On Monday we did such and such", I would make my transitions smoother and more easy flowing. I noticed that you had a few minor errors as well. In your second paragraph, I believe you meant to write "people's" instead of "people". Also, in your third paragraph, your third sentence didn't really make sense, due to grammatical errors. Overall, this is a splendid blog, and I can't wait to read more of your posts!
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